Thursday, 19 May 2011

Page 9 & 10

I slightly struggled with the way how to bring the bad guys, who ambush my main character's transport of alcohol, to the story. But in the end I decided not to confront them directly with my Italian mob, mainly for the purpose of saving the space I was running out of. But more importantly I realized there is no need for freneticly crazy shooting as this part of story was more about the moment of surprise and my main character being helpless to do anything about it.

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